Who This Service Is For

Developmental editing suits authors with a complete first or second draft who are not sure the book works as a whole, and manuscripts that agents or beta readers have said need more work.

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Request a project quote. Tell us about your book and we will send a written quote within 48 hours.

Structure, Pacing and Editorial Report

Structure, Pacing and Editorial Report

A developmental editor reads the whole manuscript as a reader and as a professional. They look at whether the opening hooks, whether the middle sustains momentum, whether characters change believably, and whether the ending pays off what the book promised. In nonfiction, they test whether the argument is clear and each chapter advances it.

You receive an editorial report that explains the main issues in order of importance and suggests how to solve them, plus margin notes that point to the exact places in the text. The goal is a revision plan you can act on.

What you receive

Included Deliverables

1

A full read of the manuscript

2

An editorial report prioritising structural issues

3

Margin notes linked to specific passages

4

A revision plan and follow-up questions

Step by step

How the process works

  1. 1

    Share your manuscript

    Send the draft, your genre and your goals.

  2. 2

    Assessment and quote

    An editor reviews a sample and we send a written quote.

  3. 3

    Editing

    Your editor works through the manuscript with tracked changes and comments.

  4. 4

    Review and questions

    You review the changes and raise questions with your editor.

Editing services

Why professional editing pays off

Here is what you gain when your book is handled by a specialist editing team at Potter Publishers, working alongside editors, designers and publishing specialists under one roof.

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Readers stay with you

Clear structure, consistent characters or arguments and clean sentences keep readers turning pages instead of putting the book down.

Better reviews

Errors and confusing passages are among the most common complaints in reader reviews. Editing removes them before publication.

The right stage at the right time

We recommend the editing stage your manuscript needs now, so you never pay to polish text that will later be cut.

You stay in control

Every change is tracked and explained. You accept, reject or discuss each suggestion, and the final decisions are always yours.

Pricing

Price factors and timeline

Every book is different, so we quote each project individually. The main factors are:

Word countEditorial stage requiredCurrent condition of the draftGenre and specialist content
Timeline: The schedule depends on word count and editorial stage. Your quote confirms the delivery date before you approve the work.
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Why Potter Publishers

Why authors choose Potter Publishers

We are a full-service publishing team for independent authors in Australia and the United States. Writers, editors, designers and marketers work together on your book, so every stage connects and nothing is lost between suppliers.

  • You keep your rights. Your book, your ISBNs, your accounts and your royalties stay in your name.
  • Written quotes. Every project starts with a clear plan, deliverables and dates before you commit.
  • Specialist team. Editors and designers matched to your genre and type of book.
  • One point of contact. A project manager keeps writing, design and publishing on schedule.
  • Print, ebook and audio. Files prepared to retailer and distributor requirements.
  • Launch support. Listings, categories and marketing planned around your readers.
Our work

Books we have helped bring to readers

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Questions and Next Steps

Ready to talk about your book? Contact us or request a quote above.

A full read, an editorial report on structure, pacing and story or argument, margin notes, and a revision plan.

No. They diagnose and advise; you revise. If you want the rewriting done for you, see our book rewriting services.